Piper’s Storybird

4 Comments

1. 

   KellB

   August 27, 2011 at 11:24 AM

   Nice story PK. The words work beautifully with the illustration. Well done!

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2. 

   Tricia -Piper's Great Aunty

   August 27, 2011 at 10:27 AM

   I really liked your story Piper, I found it really interesting and wanted to find out what was going to happen to Rose.
   Aunty Tricia

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3. 

   isabellab2011mrb

   August 16, 2011 at 6:42 PM

   Hi piper,
   I really liked your story because you aded lots of diffrent words to make your story much more exiting.

   by isabellab 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 😉 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂

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4. 

   Vanessa- Elise's mum

   August 16, 2011 at 8:13 AM

   I liked your story Piper, especially all of the different words that you used to make your writing more interesting.

   Elise’s mum

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