August 13, 2013 at 4:03 PM
Nice story Jesse, loved it
August 13, 2013 at 12:15 PM
Great story Jesse especially, for a first time author !
Very intriguing story,well done!!
August 12, 2013 at 6:49 PM
great story Jesse.what happened to Olivelia?
August 8, 2013 at 11:17 AM
Hey Jesse – I loved the story so much I came back to read it again.
Classic story – although I wonder if anyone has picked up the spelling mistake in the title 🙂
Are you sure there isnt anyway to add a hero Dad into the story – to save the day at the end so everyone goes home happy?
August 8, 2013 at 11:09 AM
Nice story Jesse – I heard you fell over again in class – stop scaring your teacher by bumping your head on the ground – or do you have a pumpkin Head too??? 🙂
August 6, 2013 at 5:34 PM
Jesse i think your story is great
August 5, 2013 at 4:15 PM
Jes that was great please make olivia not olivelia come back in a ghost form and get revenge on the evil spirit
August 4, 2013 at 10:53 AM
Hi Jesse. great story…what could happen to pumpkin boy?
August 4, 2013 at 8:39 AM
hi Jesse, that was a scary story! I hope that you don’t get caught by the “evil spirit” like Olivelia did. When you visit next time, make sure you don’t bring the “evil spirit” with you, I don’t want to be turned into a “pumpkin face!!
August 3, 2013 at 8:00 PM
I thought it was a little bit “out there”, “quirky” and “unique”!
Nice work Jesse
August 3, 2013 at 7:47 PM
it is a good story but that amazing sister of yours could have done better !!! :]
August 3, 2013 at 7:43 PM
Nice story Jesse – I think it could have used a legendary father figure though!
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