The boy who cried Pumpkin Face. by Jesse

12 Comments

  1. Nice story Jesse, loved it

  2. Great story Jesse especially, for a first time author !
    Very intriguing story,well done!!

  3. great story Jesse.what happened to Olivelia?

  4. Hey Jesse – I loved the story so much I came back to read it again.
    Classic story – although I wonder if anyone has picked up the spelling mistake in the title 🙂

    Are you sure there isnt anyway to add a hero Dad into the story – to save the day at the end so everyone goes home happy?

  5. Nice story Jesse – I heard you fell over again in class – stop scaring your teacher by bumping your head on the ground – or do you have a pumpkin Head too??? 🙂

  6. georgia thompson

    August 6, 2013 at 5:34 PM

    Jesse i think your story is great

  7. Jes that was great please make olivia not olivelia come back in a ghost form and get revenge on the evil spirit

  8. Hi Jesse. great story…what could happen to pumpkin boy?

  9. Norman Thompson

    August 4, 2013 at 8:39 AM

    hi Jesse, that was a scary story! I hope that you don’t get caught by the “evil spirit” like Olivelia did. When you visit next time, make sure you don’t bring the “evil spirit” with you, I don’t want to be turned into a “pumpkin face!!

  10. Natalie Thompson

    August 3, 2013 at 8:00 PM

    I thought it was a little bit “out there”, “quirky” and “unique”!
    Nice work Jesse

  11. Georgia Thompson

    August 3, 2013 at 7:47 PM

    it is a good story but that amazing sister of yours could have done better !!! :]

  12. Garth Thompson

    August 3, 2013 at 7:43 PM

    Nice story Jesse – I think it could have used a legendary father figure though!

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