Fantastic Hudson you have put a lot of effort into your story. The illustrations were very well done and very colourful characters.
Love Grandy and Pappou xoxo
This was a very engaging story Hudson, and kept me wanting to read to the end to find out who that guy was! Great story, look forward to reading your next one.
August 30, 2013 at 8:53 PM
Wonderful story Hudson
August 30, 2013 at 8:35 PM
Really waiting for the next story Hudson
August 30, 2013 at 6:49 PM
Great story can’t wait for the next one.
August 30, 2013 at 6:45 PM
Great use of the pictures. :):):)
August 30, 2013 at 6:40 PM
Hi Hud great story. :):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):)
August 22, 2013 at 9:41 AM
make another one please 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 dude it was awesome yo yo yo yo yo
August 19, 2013 at 8:57 PM
Cool story Hudson.
August 17, 2013 at 8:36 AM
Chocolate cake makes me want to eat chocolate cake
August 9, 2013 at 10:36 AM
great i love it
August 7, 2013 at 7:02 PM
Well done Hudson,
we loved reading it!
August 6, 2013 at 5:37 PM
Superb work Hudson. Loved the pictures, and we kept turning the page to see who was there. Great use of words to keep us interested.
August 5, 2013 at 8:41 PM
Great story Hudson, I’m looking forward to reading the next one
August 5, 2013 at 4:32 PM
Thank you hud it entertained my sister (finaly i could relax) she thinks it was funny
August 5, 2013 at 3:52 PM
Hud may you please make a Part 2? and also i think you should be an author when your older 🙂 😉 or you might not be :(.
August 5, 2013 at 3:52 PM
Hud I think it was great! keep up the good work
August 5, 2013 at 1:18 PM
Fantastic Hudson you have put a lot of effort into your story. The illustrations were very well done and very colourful characters.
Love Grandy and Pappou xoxo
August 4, 2013 at 6:03 PM
Very entertaining, colourful and imaginative.
Well done Hudson!
Love Tina, Adam & Daisy xxx
August 4, 2013 at 11:53 AM
Wow Hudson, Well done. We loved your story, especially the picture of you at the end.
August 2, 2013 at 7:08 PM
This was a very engaging story Hudson, and kept me wanting to read to the end to find out who that guy was! Great story, look forward to reading your next one.
August 2, 2013 at 5:53 PM
Great story, can’t wait to read the next one!